The mayor found to embezzle a great sum of money from... and was put INTO jail.

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"The mayor found to embezzle a great sum of money from the city government apologized to his citizens, resigned, ans was put INTO jail." (from my teacher's handout)
Is this sentence correct? If not, how should I revise it? I think "put into jail" is wrong, and it should be changed to "put IN jail". But, I found that there are 7 FREQ that use "put IN jail" in COCA. I am so confused. Thanks!
 
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It's a total mess. "The mayor was convicted of embezzling a large sum of money from the city government. He apologised to the citizens, resigned and was subsequently jailed."
 

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How about this? Is it better now? Are the comma after "mayor" and "government" necessary?

"The mayor, who was found to embezzle a great sum of money from the city government, apologized to his citizens, resigned, ans was put IN jail."

 

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No, it's not better.
 

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Can we say 'After being found to have embezzled a large sum of money from the city government, the mayor apologized to the citizens, resigned and was subsequently jailed'?
 
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