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    COuld you please correct my letter. Thanks

    Greetings Sir!
    I am John Logan, 33 years old, married, residing in Oklahoma City, an employee of this company and presently assigned with Finance section is humbly requesting to be relieved from Finance section. I have been assigned with Finance section for more than 6 years and I would like to be assigned to different section for my self-improvement. I have learned that the Logistic section is in need of personnel preferably an engineering graduate in which I am qualified. With these circumstances and your approval Sir may I request that I be relieved from Finance section and be assigned to Logistics section. Thank you sir and hoping for your consideration.

    Teachers please correct my letter and could you please add appropriate sentences. I am needing this for my reassignment. Thank you very much.

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    Re: COuld you please correct my letter. Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by smelvanzq View Post
    Greetings Sir!
    I am John Logan, 33 years old, married, residing in Oklahoma City, an employee of this company and presently assigned with Finance section is humbly requesting to be relieved from Finance section.

    Dear Mr Cagney,

    I have been assigned with working in the finance section of the company for more than 6 years, and I would like to be assigned to a different section for my own professional development. self-improvement. I have learned that the logistics section is in need of personnel looking for staff; preferably an engineering graduate, in which I am. qualified.With these circumstances and your approval Sir may Therefore, I request your approval that I be relieved from the finance section and be assigned to the logistics section.

    Thank you for your consideration sir and I look forward to your positive reply. hopeing for your consideration.

    Yours sincerely,

    John Lacey.


    Teachers please correct my letter and could you please add appropriate sentences. I am needing this for my reassignment. Thank you very much.
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