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    Can you correct my letter

    Dear All,

    This letter is for a job application. Can an expert help me to correct or add so that I can find a job.

    This has reference to the mail received yesterday.


    I have 16 years African experience - Ivory Coast, Benin, Togo, Burkina Faso, Tanzania (March 2000 to March 2016), 4 years United Arab Emirates experience (February 1995 to November 1997) and 1 year Indian experience (March 1994 to February 1995) in my work field.

    I have been working with XXX for 12 years in Ivory Coast as full time and 5 years in Tanzania as part time. I started as accountant with XXX and later I became the country head, in 2012 I left the company as I worked with a company directly in procuring and exporting of raw cashewnut from Ivory coast to India. As they was price fluctuation in the year 2012 I couldn't achieve my requirements as I exported on 1250mt. In 2013 I worked on commission basis in Ivory Coast.
    I was trying to change from cashew to other activities in 2013 and I got an opportunity to with the XXX an Indian company in importation of jute bags in Ivory Coast. From November 2013 to March 2016 I was working with them. As we couldn't get the raw materials from India, the company XXX was closed in Ivory Coast. I was the only staff handling import, sales, logistics & banking. We imported 1,2millions jute bags from Calcutta and sold to Cocoa & Cashewnut companies for exporting their agricultural products.
    With my above experience in different African countries, if my experiences suit for an opening in your company I am happy to take the work.

    If anything to be added please add, help me for a good letter so that I will get the best impression.

    Regards

    XXX
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 09-Jun-2016 at 15:48. Reason: Deleting personal information.

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    Re: Can you correct my letter

    Quote Originally Posted by tellmeastory View Post

    I have 16 years' African solid professional experience in Africa - Ivory Coast, Benin, Togo, Burkina Faso, and Tanzania (March 2000 to March 2016), 4 years in the United Arab Emirates experience (February 1995 to November 1997) and 1 year in India n experience (March 1994 to February 1995) in my work field.

    I have been working worked full time with XXX for 12 years in Ivory Coast as full time and part time with YYY for 5 years in Tanzania. as part time. I started as an accountant with XXX, and later I became the country head. In 2012, I left the company as I worked started working with a company directly involved in the procuring and exporting of raw cashew nuts from Ivory coast to India. As they was there were price fluctuations in the year 2012, I couldn't achieve my requirements target as I exported only 1250 mt. In 2013, I worked on commission basis in Ivory Coast.

    I was trying wanted to change from cashews to other products activities in 2013, and so I got an opportunity to work with the XXX - an Indian company involved in the importation of jute bags in Ivory Coast. I worked with that company from November 2013 to March 2016. I was working with them. As we couldn't get the raw materials from India, the company XXX was closed down in Ivory Coast. I was the only staff member left, and I was in charge of handling imports, sales, logistics & banking. We imported 1.2 million jute bags from Calcutta and sold them to Cocoa & Cashew-nut companies for exporting their agricultural products.

    With my above experience in different African countries, if my experiences I hope there is a suitable position for an opening me in your company. I am happy to take the work.

    I thank you for your kind consideration and look forward to hearing from you.

    Best regards,

    XXX
    "Country head" doesn't work; perhaps you mean "chief accountant" or "general manager" instead.

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