[Essay] Could you please correct my mistakes if you see any ?

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brkd

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[FONT=&quot]What language are you trying to learn and why ?

Iam trying to learn French because I love french culture, french food and it isvery nice speaking french. New languages always open door for the persons. Itgives opportunity to meet new people all around the world, to talk with themand learning new things. French language is one of the most interesting and funlanguage to learn more about. Also, I would say it's far easier than middleeastern languages like Arabic, Farsi and Hebrew, but a tad bit harder thanEuropean languages such as English and Spanish.
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emsr2d2

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

1. There are multiple missing spaces between words.
2. Proper nouns must be capitalised. You remembered to capitalise Arabic, Farsi, Hebrew, English and Spanish but failed to capitalise French.

Click on Edit Post and fix those problems, then click Save.
 
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