In today's society

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

In today's society it has become almost impossible to sift out the news from propaganda and manipulation.
 

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It's good. A couple of thoughts:

- I might say "world" instead of "society," because we have many societies.

- Since propaganda and manipulation are always part of the news, you might want to clarify that you mean real news, facts, truth, genuine information.
 

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Charlie,
Do I need the article before "news" if I rephrase my sentence like this?

In today's world it has become almost impossible to sift out real news from propaganda and manipulation.
 

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I much prefer the sentence with "real". The article before it is optional.
 

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Yes. I agree. I like your new version, Bassim.
 
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