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    Resume - architecture - please help

    Hi guys!,

    I wrote a resume for my CV, and I really need help with checking it as
    all my friends have different doubts about it.

    Thank you for help!

    Desire of making beautiful things has driven me over the years.
    I am an Architectural Assistant and a Master of Science with 3 years of professional experience. I graduated Architecture and Urban planning at Gdansk University of Technology, and had been studying at Lisbon University of Technology. I have also been studying Civil engineering at Gdansk University of Technology over 2 years.


    My broad interest has revealed in many different scale projects. In my work, I seek new solutions and try to prove that impossible is nothing. Either these are the smallest apartments in London or just a chocolate café.


    I am interested in every size projects from furniture designs through interiors, small constructions and architectural objects. My work characterizes touch of every detail care and a budget consideration. I believe beautiful design can be achieved in any circumstances.
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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Perhaps:

    The desire to create beauty has driven me over the years.

    The word "architect" s not a proper noun.

    You can earn a master's degree in chemistry or physics or biology, but I don't think you can get a master's degree in science. (I could be wrong.)

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Hi Kate
    This is a letter and not a resume or a CV. A resume is the same as a CV. It is a set of fact sheets listing your personal data, qualifications, experience, etc.


    Desire of making beautiful things has driven me over the years.
    The desire of creating beautiful things has motivated me to pursue a career in architecture.


    I am work as an Architectural Assistant and qualified with a Master of Science (in architecture I believe?) with 3 years of professional experience. I graduated at from Gdansk University of Technology in Architecture and Urban planning at Gdansk University of Technology, and had been studying studied at Lisbon University of Technology. I have also been studying Civil engineering at Gdansk University of Technology for over 2 years.

    My broad interest in architecture has been revealed in many different scale projects of different scale. In my work, I seek come up with new solutions and try to prove that impossible is nothing is impossible. Either these are I have been involved in projects from the smallest apartments in London or to just a chocolate café.


    I am interested in every size to work on projects of all sizes, from furniture designs through to interiors, small constructions and architectural objects. My work characterizes touch of every detail care and a budget consideration. My work is characterized by a personal touch and care to details and consideration given to budget contraints. I believe beautiful design can be achieved in under any circumstances.
    Last edited by tedmc; 18-Jun-2016 at 05:52.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Perhaps:

    I am an architectural assistant with three years of professional experience. I graduated with a degree in architecture and urban planning from Gdansk University of Technology, and I also studied at Lisbon University of Technology. I have also been studying civil engineering at Gdansk University of Technology for over two years.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 18-Jun-2016 at 14:26. Reason: Fix format (delete stray punctuation mark)

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Perhaps:

    The desire to create beautiful things has motivated me to pursue a career in architecture.

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    What is a chocolate café?

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    What is a chocolate café?
    A cafe where they serve a hot chocolate?

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    They are cafes that specialize in chocolate desserts. Coffee and chocolate -- mm!

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Funny you didn't know. The term "chocolate cafe" is in your letter/CV.

    Any comments on the suggestions?

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    I've been to an incredible chocolate café in Paris - I think you could order coffee there but it's speciality was huge cups (almost bowls) of the most delicious hot chocolate. Rather than being made with powder and water/milk, it was just solid bars of good dark chocolate melted over a bain-marie and then poured into the cups. Amazing!
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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