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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Say:

    I am interested in working on projects of all sizes, from furniture designs to interiors, to small constructions and architectural objects.

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    #12

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

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    I've been to an incredible chocolate café in Paris - I think you could order coffee there but its speciality was huge cups (almost bowls) of the most delicious hot chocolate. Rather than being made with powder and water/milk, it was just solid bars of good dark chocolate melted over a bain-marie and then poured into the cups. Amazing!
    There are some here in Charlotte. (Caribou Cafe is one.) I'm going to have to try it some time.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 18-Jun-2016 at 19:28. Reason: Fixed typo

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    #13

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Funny you didn't know. The term "chocolate cafe" is in your letter/CV.

    Any comments on the suggestions?
    Thank you very much for your answers! I have changed the text:

    The desire to create beautiful things has driven me over the years.
    I am a Master of Science (it is correct) and an Architectural Assistant with 3 years of professional experience. I graduated
    in Architecture and Urban planning from Gdansk University of Technology, and I also studied at Lisbon University of Technology. I have also been studying Civil engineering at Gdansk University of Technology for over 2 years.


    My broad interest (interests?) has revealed in many different scale projects. In my work (works?) I seek new solutions and try to prove that impossible is nothing (nothing is impossible?). Either these are the smallest apartments in London or just a chocolate café.


    I am interested in every size projects from furniture designs through to (?) interiors, small constructions and architectural objects.
    My work is characterized by having touch in every detail and a budget consideration.(?) I believe beautiful design can be achieved under any circumstances.

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    #14

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Listed below are some of the fields in which a person can earn an MS degree.

    Arts
    Biological and life sciences
    Business studies
    Cosmetology
    Economics and administration
    Energy
    Engineering and technology
    Fashion
    Humanities and social sciences
    Law and regulations
    Management
    Marketing and communication
    Natural sciences
    Sport
    Tourism and hospitality

    What field did you earn your degree in?

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    #15

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Try:

    The desire to create beautiful things has motivated me to pursue a career in architecture.

    (The other sentence doesn't make sense under the circumstances.)
    Last edited by Tarheel; 19-Jun-2016 at 17:56. Reason: Insert missing parenthesis

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    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    What field is your degree in?

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    #17

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    If you don't capitalize "architect" why would you capitalize "architectural assistant"?

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    #18

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    If you don't capitalize "architect" why would you capitalize "architectural assistant"?
    In the UK they capitalize Architectural Assistant as job position title.

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    #19

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

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    What field is your degree in?
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    Master of Science, Architect, Gdansk University of Technology

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    #20

    Re: Resume - architecture - please help

    So the field your degree is in is "Architecture", not "Architect".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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