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    Post Describe a city you had visited before

    Can someone help me correct the paragraphs below, I want to know where I made mistakes, thank you

    Florida is a famous city and a beautiful place for tourists. First, it has many touristic places, such as beach and seas, a lot of people visit the beach in the summer to have fun. the beach contains many magical things, for instance, delicious food, contemporary music and a lot of games played on the sand. Second, it has a huge annual festival. Every year. lots of people from around the world attend that big event. Third, Florida has a strategical location between Orlando and Miami. It has the ideal tropical weather also. All these things make Florida looks magical and becomes the most beautiful place for people to travel to.

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    Re: Describe a city you had visited before

    Welcome to the forum.

    1. Where did you get the essay title? It's not grammatical.
    2. When are you going to submit your short essay to your teacher/tutor?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Describe a city you had visited before

    And what makes you think Florida is a city between Miami and Orlando?

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