Atchane
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- Jun 23, 2016
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
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- Morocco
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- Morocco
[FONT="]Can someone help me correct the paragraphs below, I want to know where I made mistakes, thank you[/FONT][FONT="]
Florida is a famous city and a beautiful place for tourists. First, it has many touristic places, such as beach and seas, a lot of people visit the beach in the summer to have fun. the beach contains many magical things, for instance, delicious food, contemporary music and a lot of games played on the sand. Second, it has a huge annual festival. Every year. lots of people from around the world attend that big event. Third, Florida has a strategical location between Orlando and Miami. It has the ideal tropical weather also. All these things make Florida looks magical and becomes the most beautiful place for people to travel to.[/FONT]
Florida is a famous city and a beautiful place for tourists. First, it has many touristic places, such as beach and seas, a lot of people visit the beach in the summer to have fun. the beach contains many magical things, for instance, delicious food, contemporary music and a lot of games played on the sand. Second, it has a huge annual festival. Every year. lots of people from around the world attend that big event. Third, Florida has a strategical location between Orlando and Miami. It has the ideal tropical weather also. All these things make Florida looks magical and becomes the most beautiful place for people to travel to.[/FONT]
