A short poem - correction

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Isobela

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Dear all,

I hope I have chosen the correct section for my question. I have a short "silly" poem which I have translated into English for my friend who runs her own restaurant. Could you please tell me if it's okay or needs some correction? Thank you very much.

If only I could cook, then I surely would.
Because I'm a lady, I prefer to be lazy.
 
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teechar

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I don't see any grammatical problems with it.
 
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