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  1. Newbie
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    A letter to the university

    Hello everyone

    I want to pursue further education abroad, I have applied to 4 universities in Malaysia and I have received one offer letter from Asia Pacific university but I want an offer letter from my preferred university. My application status still shows an incomplete letter,(which says that my certificate is missing) though I have successfully submitted all documents. I tried multiple times to establish communication with administration office, still I could not talk to them, therefore I am going to write an e-mail asking them about my application status. This is what I have written and I request you to please check it and make suitable correction. I will be grateful to you... ( it may contain grammatical mistakes because I am from Arabic medium, so Please fix it also )


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    Dear respected sir/madam

    I am ............(name) from India, I am deeply interested to pursue my further education in economics and finance stream in your esteemed and reputed university.
    I have submitted an online application form and sent all relevant documents through post. My application status still shows an incomplete letter , though I have sent my certificate also
    Here is my reference number : ............
    And my passport number : ............

    Kindly check my documents and Inform that how long will it take to get updated. I am waiting to hear good news from you.

    your sincerely
    .................
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 02-Jul-2016 at 01:19. Reason: Enlarged font and removed unnecessary line breaks

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    Re: A letter to the university

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    I am deeply interested in pursuing my further education in economics and finance at your esteemed university.

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    Re: A letter to the university

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    My application status still shows an incomplete letter although I have sent my certificate also.

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    Re: A letter to the university

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    Please check my documents and tell me how long it will take to get updated.

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    Re: A letter to the university

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    Yours sincerely,

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