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    Email writing - Reporting an issue

    Hi All, Can someone read the below text and rephrase the same for me. I want to know how such an issue can be reported.

    Many thanks for your help.



    " I have been facing performance issues with my laptop from last 3-4 months. It hangs most of the times and I have to restart it to make it work. This process consumes a lot of my time and effects my productivity.

    Further, I reported this issue to the IT team and they advised me to upgrade the RAM. For which I have already made a service request which has been pending at their end since 13 May 2016.

    Given the above, request you to expedite my request and resolve the issue at the earliest.

    Regards
    SJPS"

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    Re: Email writing - Reporting an issue

    Perhaps:

    I have been having trouble with my laptop for the last three or four months. It freezes, and I have to reboot it to make it start working again. That wastes a lot of time, and it affects my productivity
    Last edited by Tarheel; 28-Jun-2016 at 21:46. Reason: Delete something

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    Re: Email writing - Reporting an issue

    The second paragraph is OK. Third paragraph. Say:

    Given the above, I ask you to expedite my request and resolve the issue at the earliest.

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