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    Although the political and cultural elites

    Would you please take a look at my sentence and correct my mistakes. I am wondering about the word "elite", which I have used in plural. Maybe it should be used in singular?

    Although the political and cultural elites officially welcomed thousands of refugees with open arms, they did not want them to live nearby, because their presence in their affluent suburbs would immediately reduce the price of their homes.

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    Re: Although the political and cultural elites

    I'd use the singular.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Although the political and cultural elites

    I am just wondering if the sentence is grammatically correct as it is. Do I need a comma after "nearby"?

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    Re: Although the political and cultural elites

    Yes. I'd change 'price' to 'value'.

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