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    #1

    Checking few sentences.

    1) From the mouth of our employers often present suggestion about the introduction(entry) of possibilites of having at the same time bonuses from softwares: "Aero" and "Vervo"

    2) Effect of bleeding in the movie "Harry Potter 2" develop improperly.

    3) After conducted tests we noticed that in 63 minutes, effect of blooding is stopted and it doesn't change for any longer.

    4) Currently there are no possibility to use at the same time bonuses from both softwares.

    5) Possibilty of having two bonuses at the same time wouldn't compel employers using Sawe and ELdo, to stay in other departaments.

    6) This suggestion is not intended to increase the possibility of our company, merely enable better organization, which would enable us to be in the same room regardless of their computers.


    These sentences are about diffrent things, so please don''t links the threades in these sentences.

    I'm looking forward to your help.

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    #2

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Posting multiple unrelated sentences in one post is completely pointless. It will make the replies meaningless because some people will try to help with just a couple of them, others might try to help with all of them. And some of us just won't help at all.

    I suggest you remove sentences 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6, and the unnecessary explanation, leaving just sentence 1 in this thread. After you get a few responses about sentence 1, start a new thread for sentence 2.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Sentence one. Perhaps:

    Our employers tell us....

    I can't figure out the rest of it.

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    #4

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    After 63 minutes the person stops bleeding because that person is dead. Problem solved.

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    Re: Checking few sentences.

    OK so now,
    Sentence one:

    1) From the mouth of our employers often present suggestion about the introduction(entry) of possibilites of having at the same time bonuses from softwares: "Aero" and "Vervo"

    Yes i want to tell that our employers suggest us, but in more proffesionall english, something like here ,
    Our employers used the following words: they often suggest making possibilites of having at the same time bonuses from software Aero and Vervo.

    (Aero and Vervo - it is names from our company, so don't think is it possibly to have a bonuses from this software etc. :) )

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    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Choose one.

    Our employers tell us....

    OR

    Our employers say that....

    OR

    Our employers say....

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    #7

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Are you sure you don't mean "clients"?

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    #8

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Or:

    Our employers suggest....

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    #9

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    Don't say:

    Our employers suggest us....

    Maybe you mean to say:

    Our employers suggest [something] to us.

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    #10

    Re: Checking few sentences.

    The word "software" is a noncount noun.

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