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    help me to correct my letter.

    Subject: Request the budget for training
    Dear Sir,
    I am writing this email to request the budget for training on the development of applications. The training will be held on 10th October 2016 at the hotel and it costs around 5,000 Baht.
    After I saw the details, I think this training is very useful for us. So I believe that I can apply the knowledge from this course to improve an application system that we have used in our company and make them more effective.
    I hope you will consider and approve my request. Thank you.

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    Mr. Manus
    Email: manus@XXX.com

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    Re: help me to correct my letter.

    Request the for Budget for Training

    Dear Sir,
    I am writing this email to request the for budget for training on the development use of applications computer software.
    The training will be held on 10th October 2016 at the hotel (which hotel?) and it costs around 5,000 Baht.
    After I saw the details, I think this training is very useful for us. So I believe that I can apply the knowledge from this course to improve an application system that we have used in our company and make them more effective. to improve the efficiency of our work using computer software more effectively.
    I hope you will consider and approve my request. Thank you.

    I don't think you are going for a course to learn to "develop applications", which is to design computer software. I believe it is to learn how to use computer software more effectively, thereby improving your efficiency of your work.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 04-Jul-2016 at 12:31. Reason: Fixed typo
    I am not a teacher.

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