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vogelvogelvogel3

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Our employers frequently suggest to us that it might be possible to have XXX from YYY at the same time.

I change my mind.

I want to change this sentence:

I can't write "it might be possible" because:
There is no that possibility now, but this possibility can be create.

I would something like:

Our employers frequently suggest to us to make a possibility to have XXX from YYY at the same time. <--- Is it correct ?


 

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I suspect that the word "employers" is not the correct vocabulary choice here. Clients, perhaps? vogel, I think you are falling into the trap of using formal, complex vocabulary without strong basic grammar skills. The sentences don't make sense. With short, basic sentences using correct grammar, your ideas will be understood.
 

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Renard2, perhaps you haven't seen the previous threads where those issues were brought up before. All of them. Have fun!
 

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But i don't understand you, I described it very easier....

Every part of my first posts is understandable /..

There is no words which doesn't exist..

You just don't even try to help me :(

Tell me just why this sentence is not correct :

Our employers frequently suggest to us to make a possibility to have XXX from YYY at the same time. <- ?


 

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Renard2, perhaps you haven't seen the previous threads where those issues were brought up before. All of them. Have fun!

This is unpleasant :(

Once again, vogel, you are attempting to use language that is way above your level. I'm afraid it's not possible to correct your sentence - it's not possible to work out what you are trying to say. You need to start with short, simple sentences.

OK, so maybe we will make a consent. I will write short sentences, and you will help me to transform them in one professional (buisness) sentence.
 
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We are not here to make agreements. If we can't make sense of your sentences and you are not happy with our best efforts to do so, you are free to submit them to another forum.
 

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OK, so maybe we will make an agreement. I will write short sentences, and you will help me to transform them in one professional (buisness) sentence.

That's a good plan. And remember, there's nothing wrong with short sentences. Long sentences are not necessarily more "professional" than short ones.
 

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Your forum is the best English forum, so I'm not going to leave it ...
 

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But i don't understand you, I described it very easier....

Every part of my first posts is understandable /..

There is no words which doesn't exist..

You just don't even try to help me :(

Tell me just why this sentence is not correct :

Our employers frequently suggest to us to make a possibility to have XXX from YYY at the same time. <- ?



It's not a question of the words that you use. It's a question of the way how you write. I'm not a native speaker and I cannot understand anything what you're trying to say. Always when I read your topics I feel like I'm dealing with a jigsaw or puzzle. I highly suggest you write short sentences with simple words and use basic English grammar rules.
 
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