Walt Whitman
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- English Teacher
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- Italian
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- Italy
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English teacher
Hi everybody. I was wondering if you could have a look at this detective story,
which I translated from Italian and simplified for my 13-year-old kids.
The original story was written by a German writer, Wolfgand Ecke.
Any suggestions and / or corrections would be very welcome.
The man with a golden nose
It’s ten o’clock when Mrs Austen leaves home to go shopping. It’s a gray, cloudy day but she gets on her bike and goes.
Twenty minutes later she’s back. At 10.30 she’s sitting in her living room before Inspector Roller.
“Well, Mrs Austen, once you got home you realized that the window of your bedroom was wide open.
And then you found out that a box with money and jewellery was missing. Am I correct?”
Mrs Austen nods and starts sobbing.
“Do you mind if I have a look at the bedroom?” asks Inspector Roller.
The room is in good order. The inspector, whose colleagues jokingly call “The man with a golden nose”,
begins pacing up and down smelling the air. Then he kneels down. When he gets up he has something in his hand.
“There’s a slight smell of stucco in the room. Moreover, here is a small piece of wood with some stucco.
The thief or thieves must have something to do with stucco and wood!”
“The glassworks!” exclaims Mrs Austen quite astonished. “The glassworks! You can see it from the window.”
“I’ll be back in half an hour,” says the inspector.
Mr Moser, the glazier, looks surprised when the inspector tells him that he suspects one of his workers to be a thief.
“Someone stole a box with some money from a nearby house.”
Soon after the box is found hidden under the seat of the delivery van.
Mr Moser rushes into the workshop where the two apprentices are working.
“Mr Wilson,” asks the Inspector, “where were you this morning between 10.00 and 10.20?”
The apprentice swallows hard, “Well, I was at the doctor’s. I was back just before 10.30.
I think the boss can confirm.”
The inspector addresses the other apprentice. “And you, Mr Blackman?”
Robert Blackman lowers his eyes scratching his head, “Well, I don’t know… I was here, in the workshop.”
Then he adds, “I’m innocent, I’m not a thief.”
“Look, calm down!” says Mr Moser, then he turns to the inspector and asks,
“Is everything still in the box? I mean, the money and the jewels.
Perhaps you could look for fingerprints over the box…”
The inspector replies, “Thank you, Mr Moser, I’m sure money and jewels are still in the box.
As to fingerprints, well… I do already know who the thief is.”
Who do you think the thief is?
Thank you very much.
WW
[Edit] I’m afraid I posted on the wrong Forum. Would a moderator be kind enough to move the post to the Teaching English Forum? I’m really sorry.
Hi everybody. I was wondering if you could have a look at this detective story,
which I translated from Italian and simplified for my 13-year-old kids.
The original story was written by a German writer, Wolfgand Ecke.
Any suggestions and / or corrections would be very welcome.
The man with a golden nose
It’s ten o’clock when Mrs Austen leaves home to go shopping. It’s a gray, cloudy day but she gets on her bike and goes.
Twenty minutes later she’s back. At 10.30 she’s sitting in her living room before Inspector Roller.
“Well, Mrs Austen, once you got home you realized that the window of your bedroom was wide open.
And then you found out that a box with money and jewellery was missing. Am I correct?”
Mrs Austen nods and starts sobbing.
“Do you mind if I have a look at the bedroom?” asks Inspector Roller.
The room is in good order. The inspector, whose colleagues jokingly call “The man with a golden nose”,
begins pacing up and down smelling the air. Then he kneels down. When he gets up he has something in his hand.
“There’s a slight smell of stucco in the room. Moreover, here is a small piece of wood with some stucco.
The thief or thieves must have something to do with stucco and wood!”
“The glassworks!” exclaims Mrs Austen quite astonished. “The glassworks! You can see it from the window.”
“I’ll be back in half an hour,” says the inspector.
Mr Moser, the glazier, looks surprised when the inspector tells him that he suspects one of his workers to be a thief.
“Someone stole a box with some money from a nearby house.”
Soon after the box is found hidden under the seat of the delivery van.
Mr Moser rushes into the workshop where the two apprentices are working.
“Mr Wilson,” asks the Inspector, “where were you this morning between 10.00 and 10.20?”
The apprentice swallows hard, “Well, I was at the doctor’s. I was back just before 10.30.
I think the boss can confirm.”
The inspector addresses the other apprentice. “And you, Mr Blackman?”
Robert Blackman lowers his eyes scratching his head, “Well, I don’t know… I was here, in the workshop.”
Then he adds, “I’m innocent, I’m not a thief.”
“Look, calm down!” says Mr Moser, then he turns to the inspector and asks,
“Is everything still in the box? I mean, the money and the jewels.
Perhaps you could look for fingerprints over the box…”
The inspector replies, “Thank you, Mr Moser, I’m sure money and jewels are still in the box.
As to fingerprints, well… I do already know who the thief is.”
Who do you think the thief is?
Thank you very much.
WW
[Edit] I’m afraid I posted on the wrong Forum. Would a moderator be kind enough to move the post to the Teaching English Forum? I’m really sorry.
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