EMHM
Member
- Joined
- Oct 7, 2015
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Bahrain
- Current Location
- Bahrain
Hi, I would like to improve my English by trying to compose 5 to 6 lines about any subject, and get your comments on how to correct/improve it.I'll start today and if this is not prohibited, I'll continue posting and accepting your comments.Here is my first passage:
" Today, while I was listening to the BBC, where the program was about the old vs new ways of publishing, I heard a very good comments from one of the commentator.
“ in the time of 24 hours live news, the news paper is still exist “,He said .
I was overwhelmed by this fact, and thought that this is true, at the time some of our newspaper is online, live and 24 hours updating, but still there are people who prefer to buy the paper edition."
Thank you for all.
" Today, while I was listening to the BBC, where the program was about the old vs new ways of publishing, I heard a very good comments from one of the commentator.
“ in the time of 24 hours live news, the news paper is still exist “,He said .
I was overwhelmed by this fact, and thought that this is true, at the time some of our newspaper is online, live and 24 hours updating, but still there are people who prefer to buy the paper edition."
Thank you for all.