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    Could you check if my teacher missed any mistakes?

    I would appreciate if you could tell me what my writing level is such C2,C1, B2 or B1

    Important: The errors are the words/ phrases struck out

    BENEFITS TO A COUNTRY OF PEOPLE SPENDING TIME ABROAD

    It is well known that people who have travelled traveled around the world, visiting different cultures and meeting new people with polar opposite mentalities, not only are they (missing) the most open-minded but they (missing) also contribute to make our society a better place. However, how exactly does it (missing) affect to a country having people who have travelled traveled through the globe?

    First and foremost, it is necessary to take into account that the benefits brought to the table will depend on how much time is spent abroad, as well as how many countries have been visited. Talking about the adaptations to every kind of equipment of at a workplace might be a good benefit to start with. Such adventurous people are used to work in (missing) with varied materials and different organizations at their foreigner foreign jobs, and that is an overwhelming advantage.

    Secondly, such an experience helps them to think out of the box, and this is arguably as important a benefit as the previous one. It makes them growing as a person and allows them to create their own thoughts without any previous prejudices. However, it is also relevant to get a job, since having such a mentality is considered to be suitable for a wide variety of works jobs. Accordingly, little by little more companies, firms and business are looking for people with these characteristics.

    To sum up, I truly believe that of the two benefits outlined above, to be open-minded about different ways of thinking is the most important for a country. It ensures friendlier and more prepared people for its future.

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    #2

    Re: Could you check if my teacher missed any mistakes?

    Both "travelled" and "traveled" are considered acceptable spellings.

    www.dictionary.com

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    #3

    Re: Could you check if my teacher missed any mistakes?

    First sentence. Try:

    It is well known that people who have traveled around the world, visiting foreign cultures and meeting new people, are not only the most open minded but also contribute to making our society a better place. However, how exactly does it affect a country having people who have traveled throughout the globe?

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    #4

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    Second paragraph. Second sentence. Try:

    Talking about the adaptations to every kind of equipment at a workplace might be a good place to start.

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    Next sentence. Try:

    Such adventurous people are used to working with various materials and different organizations at their jobs, and that is an overwhelming advantage.

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    Next paragraph. Second sentence. Try:

    It lets them grow as people...without being guided by prejudice.

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    ...a wide variety of work

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    Accordingly, more and more companies are looking for people with these characteristics.

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    Next paragraph. Say:

    of the two benefits...more important....

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    It ensures friendlier and better prepared people....

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    #8

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    You write like a native speaker. I can't really tell the difference. In fact, your writing is better than that of many native speakers.

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    #9

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    You are really gifted to write. What and how you write sounds much more natural. I wish I could write like you. Thank you so much!

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    All I ask is that you give me some likes.

    (I have been doing it for over sixty (60) years, so I should be good at it.)

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