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    Please help me to correct these sentences

    We are enclosing the application and the documents herewith for the extension of stay for parents of our employee, Mr. Diaz, working as QS in our organization. They are currently on visit visa and we would like to extend the visit visa for further extension.

    As his wife has recently passed away due to lung cancer. He needs their support to take care of his children as there is no one else there to look after them.

    Therefore, we respectfully request you to approve their extension of stay and provide us with an extended

    We are looking forward for your favorable response

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    Re: Please help me to correct these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post
    We are enclosing the application and the documents herewith for the extension of stay for THE parents of our employee, Mr. Diaz, working as QS in our organization. They are currently HERE ON A VISITOR'S visa and we would like to extend the visit FOR SIX MONTHS.

    As his wife has recently passed away due to lung cancer, HE needs their support to take care of his children as there is no one else there to look after them.

    Therefore, we respectfully request you to approve their extension of stay and provide us with an extended

    We are looking forward TO your favorable response
    I don't know what you intend to follow "provide us with".

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    Re: Please help me to correct these sentences

    An extended visa?

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