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    #11

    Re: Assessment Report

    Two things, Chowberry.

    It's an assessment OF George.

    Unless you have to say everything twice, you can shorten it by at least one paragraph.

    You're doing this assessment of somebody who is leaving?

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    #12

    Re: Assessment Report

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Ted, you are right. The assessment talks about George's skills. But does it also have to talk about itself? Ted, you improved that section. However, it is that very improvement that makes it clear to me that it is not needed.
    Tarheel
    What do you mean by the assessment talking about itself? I said it is the assessment(for a particular period)and not the period itself that highlighted something. How can a period of time highlight anything?
    Last edited by tedmc; 19-Jul-2016 at 12:10.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    #13

    Re: Assessment Report

    It's in post #9, and it repeats what has already been said. The same thing is repeated later.

    (I don't want to do any more typing than I have to.)

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