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    Thank you for your interest.......

    Thank you for your interest in Toyota Certified Used Vehicles San Pablo, Laguna. We will contact you as soon as we go online for more queries........


    Are the sentenses correct? What else can i add for more politely approach?

    Thank you.

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    Re: Thank you for your interest.......

    Quote Originally Posted by R.a. Punzalan View Post
    Thank you for your interest in Toyota Certified Used VehiclesSan Pablo, Laguna. We will contact you as soon as we go online for more queries........


    Are the sentences correct? What else can I add for a more politely approach?

    Thank you.
    I presume that is a automated reply to customers' queries by e-mail.

    I would say: We will contact you shortly.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #3

    Re: Thank you for your interest.......

    Are they not online now? Perhaps:

    We will tell you when we go online.

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    Re: Thank you for your interest.......

    It's polite enough and long enough. There's no need for obsequiousness.

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