EMHM
Member
- Joined
- Oct 7, 2015
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Bahrain
- Current Location
- Bahrain
I have written this passage as an email to one of our vendors . Please check it for me, to avoid mistakes in future .
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Dear Mr. Hari,
With reference to our joint-site-visit, for BB building, on 16[SUP]th[/SUP] of June 2016, and with reference to the recommendations you sent, we agreed with the choice of changing the entire CCTV system in the above mentioned building.
The new system suppose to be fulfill replacement of the existing one, as it is used for covering the hall and its two entries, without the extra locations we visited.
So that, can you send us a Budgetary Quotation for a CCTV system for BB building ?
Regards
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"
Dear Mr. Hari,
With reference to our joint-site-visit, for BB building, on 16[SUP]th[/SUP] of June 2016, and with reference to the recommendations you sent, we agreed with the choice of changing the entire CCTV system in the above mentioned building.
The new system suppose to be fulfill replacement of the existing one, as it is used for covering the hall and its two entries, without the extra locations we visited.
So that, can you send us a Budgetary Quotation for a CCTV system for BB building ?
Regards
"