I can't speak for anyone else, but I'm not going to click on a link to get to the document. Not only am I not comfortable clicking on external links but it also makes it really difficult for us to include a quote, with corrections, in our responses.
You can post your story here for us to look at - however, please note that really long posts don't usually attract much help as they take up too much time. Post one paragraph in a new thread, wait for responses and then post the next paragraph in a new thread.
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