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    Correct my passage Please ( A page of my diary )

    I have written this passage just for practice. Please check it for me.

    " Today I had a long journey all over my city. In the morning I went to the Training Center where I spent 2 hours listening to three of my colleges presenting their assignments.

    At 12 o’clock, I went to JJ station where I met a contractor who will do replacement work of our old equipment and wants to take physical measurements of the room where he is going to fix the new equipment .

    Two hours later, I visited a shopping mall where I had my launch and did a quick shopping journey before the end of my break time, then I came back to my office to report today’s activities. "
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 26-Jul-2016 at 17:18. Reason: Standardised font

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    Re: Correct my passage Please ( A page of my diary )

    Quote Originally Posted by EMHM View Post
    I have written this passage just for practice. Please check it for me.

    "Today I had a long journey travelled all over my city. In the morning I went to the Training Center, where I spent 2 two hours listening to three of my colleges colleagues presenting their assignments.

    At 12 o’clock, I went to JJ station where I met a contractor who will do replacement work replace of our old equipment and wants wanted to take physical measurements of measure the room where he is going to fix install the new equipment.

    Two hours later, I visited a shopping mall where I had my launch lunch. and I did a quick bit of shopping journey before the end of my lunch break time, then I came back to my office to report today’s activities."
    See my corrections above.

    Be careful with your spacing around punctuation:

    - Don't put a space after opening quotation marks.
    - Don't put a space before closing quotation marks.
    - Don't put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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