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  1. rock-onn's Avatar
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    lot of commas in a sentence

    Please consider an example of writing an letter to a ABC bank manager.

    I,Vipin, account holder of ABC bank, wish to apply for a personal job.


    In the above sentence I used commas a lot and i think it may be in error.

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    Re: lot of commas in a sentence

    The commas are OK but there should be a space after each one. What is a "personal job"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: lot of commas in a sentence

    Say:

    Please consider an example of a letter to an ABC bank manager.

    And:

    I, Vipin, an account holder at ABC bank, wish to apply for a job there.

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