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    Yawning out loud

    I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes.

    The theatre play was long and boring, and some in the audience expressed their discontent by demonstratively yawning out loud.

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    Re: Yawning out loud

    You should remove theater. It's redundant.
    I am not a teacher.

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