Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. I am not sure if I have punctuated it correctly. Would you please correct my mistakes?
David believed he lived in paradise until one afternoon a man in a dark suit carrying a briefcase knocked at his door telling him his wife had begun divorce proceedings.
David believed he lived in paradise until one afternoon a man in a dark suit carrying a briefcase knocked at his door telling him his wife had begun divorce proceedings.