Movie 1 is on straight after movie 2.

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"The movie 1 is on TV straight after movie 2 daily."

Please check.
 

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Better:

The second movie comes on right after the first movie.
 

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It needs two more words to say the same thing as the original text: The second movie comes on right after the first movie every day.
 

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It would be very odd if Movie 1 were on after Movie 2.
 

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It would be very odd if Movie 1 were on after Movie 2.

Is my sentence incorrect? You told me that in some other thread. You remember "The Superman series is on straight after the Dragon Ball z."
 

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Yes. it's incorrect. You said that the first movie followed the second!

No, that was a mistake. Please just forget the numbers and then check it.
 

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If we forget the numbers it makes even less sense.:-(
 

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Okay, movie two comes on right after the movie one every day.
 

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That's better, but you don't need "the" in that sentence.
 
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