Welcome to the forum.Hi everybody,
I beg for your help to review and correct my cover letter.
An employer replied
backsaying that it's full of grammatical and usage errors!
Please find it herewith:Here is my letter:
Respected,Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms + surname
I am a
native-like fluentnear-native English speaker, offeringwith 25 years of corporate experience as a lecturer of TEFL, ESP, EAP, VESL, MT, EOP and Testing, and as an academic supervisor and project manager across multinational educational institutions with whom I have had a bidirectional development and appreciation. (I don't know what you mean by the underlined part.)
I have been working in different cultural environments with
diversitypeople of diverse ethnic backgrounds and all types of learners, which has broadened my knowledge and inspired me to utilize my skills to addmake significant contributions throughout my career.
am a holder ofhold several certificates and PD (I don't know what that is) coursesqualifications:
. TESOL-based course, University of East Anglia, UK.
. Bachelor of Education and Arts, TEFL, English Literature.
. Diploma in Curriculum and Instructions.
. Diploma in Educational Technology.
. Needs analysis and materials development USAID. (Is that a place?)
. SATD (student's achievement test development) AUC. (Is that a place?)
. CELT (Computers in English Language Teaching) USAID.
. Integrated ESL course (Spectrum).
. Training Trainers for E-training.
. Teacher Training, by "Peter Lucantoni.
. Facilitator Development Program, Mclaughlin, Professional Development Manager.
. TESOL convention (Best practice in TEFL), USAID.
. Marketing private and governmental English language institutes. AUC.
. KASAAL, KSA Association of Language Teachers.
. Cert. Classroom Management.
. Cert. Classroom Activities.
. LMS system. MOHE, KSA
. Cert. Teaching New Total English, TQ, Pearson.
. Cert. Engaging& motivating students in language learning.
. Several Appreciation Certificates for Extra Duties and Valuable Contribution.
I assume responsibility for helping learners to articulate and follow their values to make a change and better their world.
AndI have committed to contributecontributing to the overall success of theeach corporation I have worked for.
I would love to
enrich andshare my 25 years of experience in teaching, supervising and management with your talented team.
Please see the attached résumé.
LookingI look forward to a favorable reply,
Please see my suggested corrections, amendments and comments above, marked in red.