I'm going to check the whole story. I just want to show you the most serious mistakes which you'd better avoid from now on.
We normally say "get on the bus" and "get off the bus' but "get in the car" and "get out of the car'. The verb "to stare" requires the preposition "at". The whole sense of this touching story is not clear enough to me. I cannot rewrite your story but I can assure you that if I had to tell a story like this one, I'd definitely do in another way. I didn't understand anything after " I thought that if I did anything...".
You have also misspelled some words like "people" and "moustache"
My question to you is: why do you want to write something like this? Are you writing a story or what?
Student or Learner