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    the shipyard executed a big contract by order of the owner

    Hello.

    A yearago, the shipyard executed a big contract by order of the owner by installing highly modernised scrubbers on four car carriers.

    Is this sentence understandable to you? What do you think of the bolded fragment? Is it properly formulated?

    Thank you.
    Last edited by JACEK1; 07-Aug-2016 at 20:00.

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    Re: the shipyard executed a big contract by order of the owner

    Please use the "Edit Post" function to enlarge the font to make your post readable. It's far too small. Thanks.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: the shipyard executed a big contract by order of the owner

    Ask yourself: Would the shipyard have executed any contract without an order from the owner? No, so "by order of the owner" is redundant.

    I suggest: 'A year ago, the shipyard executed a big contract to install highly modernised scrubbers on four car carriers.'

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    Re: the shipyard executed a big contract by order of the owner

    Highly modernised scrubbers does not sound natural to me. It could mean "old scrubbers that have been modernised or refurbished".
    Do you mean the most modern scrubbers?
    I am not a teacher.

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