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    can you please correct this letter

    I have increased my employees salary. Now I want to write a letter to themto increase the business. Please see below and correct if any mistake.

    First of all, I congratulate all of you that you have received amended salary.
    In return, the management is expecting remarkable contribution to increase our business from each employee. Although, we are in a stable situation now, we need to put more effort to achieve more business in the coming days. So, I request all of you to gear up and accelerate to boost our business volume at the maximum level by developing a healthy relationship with our existing members as well as attract new members by dealing with them in a professional manner.

    Please continue to take advantage of the many ways in which we can assist you and feel free to call me whenever I may personally be of help to you.

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    Re: can you please correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by sanjfer View Post
    I have increased my employees' salary. Now I want to write a letter to ask them to increase their effort. business. Please see below and correct if any mistakes.

    First of all, I congratulate all of you that you have received amended on the recent salary increment.

    In return, the management is expecting remarkable greater contribution from you to increase our productivity. business from each employee. Although, we are in a stable situation now, we need to put more effort to achieve more business in the near future. coming days. So, I request all of you to gear up and accelerate to boost our business volume at the maximum level and maximize output by developing a healthy relationship with our existing members as well as attracting new members by dealing with them in a professional manner.

    Please continue to take advantage of the many ways in which we can assist you and feel free to call me whenever if I may personally be of help to you.
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