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tritri

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Hello!!! I'm French and currently in Australia and I want apply for a skill job, but I don't really know what it is use to write.
And I think I also have an orthographic issue.
Here my cover letter:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Please find enclosed my CV in response to the assistant project manager position advertised. I am very interested in this position, and believe that my education and competencies are a match for the position.


You’re currently looking for an engineer to assist a project manager on various tasks over the entire project of the client.

During my previous experience as project management engineer at XXXXXX Company, I had the opportunity to participate in a chemical industrial project of 20M€. Was responsible for managing project deadlines, and for project progress reporting using software like MS Project.

During my internship as site supervisor at XXXXX Company, I was responsible for planning and managing the installation of structured cabling systems. I was responsible for quality controls to ensure customer satisfaction. I enforced security and environmental standards, I checked quality and improved it by developing corrective action plans when necessary.

I look forward to meeting you. Do not hesitate to contact me by phone or send information into my email account.
Thank you, in advance, for your consideration.

Sincerely,
 

teechar

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Dear Sir or Madam,

[STRIKE]Please find enclosed my CV in response to[/STRIKE] I wish to apply for the assistant project manager position advertised. I am very interested in this position, and believe that my education and competencies qualify me as a serious candidate for it. [STRIKE]are a match for the position.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]You’re currently looking for an engineer to assist a project manager on various tasks over the entire project of the client.[/STRIKE]

During my previous experience as project management engineer at XXXXXX Company, I had the opportunity to participate in a €20 million [STRIKE]chemical[/STRIKE] industrial chemical project. [STRIKE]of 20M€.[/STRIKE] I was responsible for managing project deadlines, and for project progress reporting using software like MS Project.

Moreover, during my internship as site supervisor at XXXXX Company, I was responsible for planning and managing the installation of structured cabling systems. I was also responsible for quality control to ensure customer satisfaction. I enforced security and environmental standards and checked quality and improved it by developing corrective action plans when necessary.

I have attached a copy of my CV with this email.
I have enclosed a copy of my CV with this letter.

I look forward to meeting you, and please do not hesitate to contact me by phone or [STRIKE]send information into my[/STRIKE] email. [STRIKE]account.[/STRIKE]

Thank you in advance for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Alan DuPont

[STRIKE] Sincerely,[/STRIKE]
If you're writing a paper letter, use the orange line. Otherwise, if you're applying via email, use the blue line.
 
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