[General] Re: please correct the incorrect sentences or words

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Dr Heibe

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Re: please correct the incorrect sentences or words

Dear, Sir/Madam

Hello, my name is XXX XXX. I'm a student who has graduated secondry school in Somalia at XXX primary and secondry school and has scored 93% marks

As i made a various research of universities in the field of medicine, i discovered that benadir university is the most excellent in medicine field.

I'm kindly writting this letter to apply faculty of medicine and surgery in your university as i want to continue my study in high level.

I wish you will allow me to be one of your students in that field.


Yours faithfully,
XXX
 
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Re: please correct the incorrect sentences or words

Is this supposed to be a cover letter, or are you just asking for information?
 
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