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    Please correct this letter,thanks

    I am writing to request more information on children's clothing product that your company needs as follows:
    quantity, style, material, color, quality and other requirements.
    I would like to brief about our company.
    Our company specializes in manufacturing children's clothing of high quality, skilled workforce and modern machinery, the product has always been closely examined. We can meet the strict regulations of the customer.
    We hope to soon receive your reply

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    Re: Please correct this letter,thanks

    Delete the first sentence as it makes no sense. Say:

    I would like to briefly tell you about our company. We manufacture quality children's clothing with our skilled workforce and modern machinery. The product has always been closely inspected for defects. We can meet the strict requirements of the customer. Hoping to hear from you soon.

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    Re: Please correct this letter,thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by nghia13978 View Post
    I am writing to request more information on Please provide the necessary details (outlined below) for the children's clothing products that your company has inquired about. needs as follows:

    Required information:

    quantity,
    style,
    material,
    color,
    quality, and other requirements.

    I would like to briefly about our add that our company Our company specializes in manufacturing high-quality children's clothing, of high quality, and that with our skilled workforce and modern machinery, the our products are has always subjected to the strictest quality-control procedures. been closely examined. We can meet the strict regulations of the customer.

    We hope look forward to soon receiving your reply.

    Best regards,

    Pat Toner
    Sales Manager
    Note that if I've misinterpreted your first sentence, then just deleted it, as Tarheel has suggested.

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    #4

    Re: Please correct this letter,thanks

    Nghia, it looks like Teechar made a good guess as to what you really meant to say.

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