Answer to one of my teacher

[heaventylor1992]

Hello! I would like to know if this e-mail is correct or not : :-D

"Good evening,

Sorry for replying so late, but I was really busy and I promise I will try to answer quicker next time!

I am sending this e-mail to say that I'm coming at the field trip as well as Korinne who asked me if I can tell you that she is coming too.

Yours truly,

Heaven Tylor"

Thank you in advance for your help ;-)

 

[teechar]

I will try to answer [STRIKE]quicker[/STRIKE] more quickly next time!

I am sending this email to [STRIKE]say[/STRIKE] confirm that both Korinne and I will be going on [STRIKE] I'm coming at [/STRIKE] the field trip. [STRIKE]as well as Korinne who asked me if I can tell you that she is coming too.[/STRIKE]

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