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    #1

    Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    "Nowadays videoes concerning the personal lives of the people get more footage."

    Please check.

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    #2

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    Footage is the measure of how many minutes are recorded, not how many are shown. I think you mean exposure, play or airtime.
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    #3

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    You have another spelling error. Was there no red line under any of the words when you typed them?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    The red line only appears on devices that can display one. My Android phone can't.
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    #5

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    I think that "famous people" or "celebrities" would work better in your sentence than "the people", and so would "a lot", or "too much" instead of "more."

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    #6

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    videoes videos

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    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    "Nowadays the videos concerning the personal lives of the people get a lot of airtime."

    Please check.

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    #8

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    See post 2.

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    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    You have another spelling error. Was there no red line under any of the words when you typed them?
    No.

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    #10

    Re: Videoes concerning the personal lives of the people.

    Re-read posts #2 and #5.

    Sometimes we think we are wasting our time trying to improve your sentences.

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