Here are some comments for you to consider:
- "The chess game" is not natural. Use "the game of chess" at the start, and subsequently simply say, "chess."
- Please take out unnecessarily complex expressions such as "... syllabus is highly voluminous" to make your essay slimmer and easier to read.
- Get your facts right about the topic. For instance, you say, "The rules in each phase are different." That's incorrect.
- Always put a single space after a full stop.
I look forward to reading the slimmer version of that essay.
Student or Learner