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    Narrative paragraph

    I have just read an Narrative paragraph. I really like to try to make one. if you have some idea about my paragraph, pls share with me. thanks
    A Horrific Experience

    Today is also the day that I had a painful experience 3 years ago. At that time, I had a lovely dog, LuLu. I spent all of my free time looking after him, and I loved him so much. LuLu used to play with me in the garden and often warmly welcome me at the gate when I come back. That day, the first day of my first work after graduation, I happily went home after work. As usual, he ran out the gate and picked me up. He often observes carefully before crossing the road, but that time was a contrary. He crossed the road without aware that one truck was rushing with lightning speed. I screamed, but it was too late, the truck could not break in time. I turned panic-stricken at the sight of horrific scenes, my dog ​​was crushed by truck. He was sore in a pool of blood, breathed the weak breath. Everything collapsed and I immediately cried. Lulu was gone forever. Although many years have passed, there is still day which I'll never forget in my mind, the day that I lost my best friend.

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    Re: Narrative paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by nhungnguyen13 View Post
    I have just read an N a narrative paragraph, and I would really like to try to make write one. If you have some idea any comments/suggestions about my paragraph, please share them with me. Thanks.

    A Horrific Experience

    Today is also the This day that I had a painful experience 3 years ago, I had a painful experience. At that time, I had a lovely dog called LuLu. I spent all of my free time looking after him, and I loved him so much. LuLu used to play with me in the garden and often warmly welcome me at the gate when I came come back from school. That day, the first day of in my first work job after graduating, on, I happily went home after work. As usual, he ran out the gate to meet me. and picked me up. He would often observes look carefully before crossing the road, but that time he didn't. was a contrary. He crossed the road without aware noticing that one a truck was rushing with lightning speed towards him. I screamed, but it was too late; the truck could not break brake in time. I was absolutely shocked and horrified to see turned panic-stricken at the sight of horrific scenes, my dog ​​was crushed by truck. He was in pain, sore lying in a pool of blood, and his breath was faint. ed the weak breath. I felt everything had collapsed in my life, and I immediately cried. Lulu was gone forever. Although many years have passed, there is still that day which I'll never forget - in my mind, the day that I lost my best friend.
    RIP Lulu.

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    Re: Narrative paragraph

    Thanks for sharing me useful suggestions

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    Re: Narrative paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by nhungnguyen13 View Post
    Thanks for sharing me those/your useful suggestions [with me].
    Note my corrections above. However, also remember that there is no need to write a new post to say "Thank you". Simply click on the "Thank" button on any post you find helpful.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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