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A Horrific Experience
Today is also theThis day that I had a painful experience3 years ago, I had a painful experience. At that time, I had a lovely dog called LuLu. I spent all of my free time looking after him, and I loved him so much. LuLu used to play with me in the garden and often warmly welcome me at the gate when I came comeback from school. That day, the first day ofin my first workjob after graduating, on,I happily went home after work. As usual, he ran out the gate to meet me. and picked me up.He would often observeslook carefully before crossing the road, but that time he didn't. was a contrary.He crossed the road without awarenoticing that onea truck was rushing with lightning speed towards him. I screamed, but it was too late; the truck could not breakbrake in time. I was absolutely shocked and horrified to see turned panic-stricken at the sight of horrific scenes,my dog wascrushed by truck. He was in pain, sorelying in a pool of blood, and his breath was faint. ed the weak breath.I felt everything had collapsed in my life, and I immediately cried. Lulu was gone forever. Although many years have passed, there is still that day which I'll never forget - in my mind,the day that I lost my best friend.
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