[Essay] an formal email to international office to ask further information

[humam123]

Dear Sir or Madam,
This is to request more information about English language courses at Ghent university . I am extremely interested in these courses and I am anxious to apply for it through your office for admission in 2016.
My name is Humam . I am currently studying a master program at Ghent university specialized in IT and Electronic . I will graduate next semester but my level in English is not good enough especially in speaking and pronunciation . That is why I want to improve them . I have some inquiries about the courses . First, do the you provide English courses which concentrate on conversation .
Second, must I do a test in order to determine my current level in English before I apply for the course . Third, do you provide discounts for students .
Thank you in advance for your attention for my request . I look forward to receive your response .
Yours sincerely,
Humam ramadan

 

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This is to request more information about the English language courses at Ghent University. I am extremely interested in these courses and I am [STRIKE]anxious[/STRIKE] eager to apply for [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] one through your office for admission in 2016.

[STRIKE] My name is Humam .[/STRIKE] I am currently studying in a master's program at Ghent University, specialized in IT and Electronics. I will graduate next semester, but my level in English is not good enough, especially in speaking and pronunciation. [STRIKE]That is why I want to improve them .[/STRIKE] I have some [STRIKE]inquiries[/STRIKE] questions about [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] your courses. First, do [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] you provide English courses which [STRIKE]concentrate[/STRIKE] focus on conversation?
Second, must I do a test in order to determine my current level in English before I apply for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a course? Third, do you provide discounts for students already enrolled in other programs at the university?

Thank you in advance for your attention, and [STRIKE]for my request .[/STRIKE] I look forward to receiving your reply. [STRIKE]response .[/STRIKE]

Yours faithfully, [STRIKE]sincerely,[/STRIKE]

Humam Ramadan

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