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    Appraisal Report


    Please help me improve the following appraisal report, which I am unfamiliar with. Thank you very much.

    Sequel to the past years, Wesley extends his considerable contributions to the clubhouse in various aspects.

    Wesley has developed himself as an indispensable part of this clubhouse, having worked at there for nearly 5 years and excelled in the different variety of clubhouse management, especially the full set of bookings of lawn bowling green. Credit to Wesley's strong attentiveness and intelligent liaison with booking organizations and the members of public, he has consistently produced accurate and precise bookings records for the senior officials' checking and endorsement, which greatly strengthens the effective and efficient management of our booking system.

    As an industrious staff with immense potential to manage higher level of job duties, whenever the seniors like me ask him for the information and advice about management issue of the clubhouse, he is able to immediately provide us with detailed and accurate response or reports about the cases and he is more than capable of finishing all the assigned tasks, even the extra and urgent one, timely and satisfactorily. Possessing with strong leadership and a good wealth of experience in horticultural and arboricultural management, actively assisting the seniors to manage the horticultural areas at the playground. Courtesy of his sensibly liaison with the horticultural contractor and close supervision of their workers, their quality of horticultural maintenance services to the playground can be ensured all along. Likewise, benefited from Wesley's close scrutiny on the trees in the backyard of the clubhouse and instant corrective reaction towards the occurrence of trees irregularities in the clubhouse, nearly all the trees in the clubhouse have been well maintained and developed, even in the typhoon season and the public safety can also be greatly upheld in return.

    During the past months, the clubhouse has experienced a series of notable improvement works like the additional installation of lockers, wooden bench and instantaneous water heaters in the changing rooms, the improvement work on the surface cycling area and the work on conversion from fast food kiosk into a storeroom as well as the renovation work on the tennis courts. Wesley has been actively involved in those improvement works, offering his productive advice during the discussion with several technical units about the work and assisting the seniors to supervise the implementation of the works carried out by them in different stages. Without his wholehearted endeavor towards the works, those works could have never been initiated, facilitated and completed efficiently and effectively.

    Being a helpful and approachable staff, Wesley always shows his helping hand to his colleagues and he has always maintained very harmonic relationship with everybody working alongside him including the members of public. Wesleyhas also demonstrated his strong mentorhsip by spending much time on assisting the seniors to nurture the newcomer staff, facilitating the newcomer swiftly integrate into the working team, which considerably benefits the management of the clubhouse to a large extent. Similarly, Wesley is a highly self-motivated staff, aiming to develop himself as an all round managerial talent by proactively enrolling in different kind of department run training courses with credible result, particularly his successful obtainment of the certificate of arborist in June 2016. Indeed, Wesley's self-strengthening determination not only benefit himself, but also greatly enrichs the efficiency and effectiveness of the working team.
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    Re: Appraisal Report

    Please help me improve the following appraisal report, which I am unfamiliar with.

    Isn't the report written by you?

    Sequel to the past years, Wesley extends his considerable contributions to the clubhouse in various aspects.
    During his tenure, Wesley has made significant contributions to the club (not clubhouse) in various aspects.

    What is Wesley's position in the club?
    I am not a teacher.

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    tedmc, the report is written by me and Wesley is the assistant manager of my clubhouse. Thank you for your advice.

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    If you wrote it, how can you be unfamiliar with it?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    I want to know in what ways I can write a better staff appraisal report. Thank you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by chowbarry View Post


    Sequel to Over the past few years, Wesley extends his has made considerable contributions to the clubhouse in various aspects.

    Wesley has developed established himself as an indispensable part of this clubhouse, having worked at there here for nearly 5 years and excelled in the different a variety of clubhouse management tasks, especially the full set of bookings of lawn-bowling greens. Credit to Much to his credit, Wesley's strong attentiveness and intelligent liaison with booking organizations and the members of public , he has consistently produced have enabled him to achieve accurate and precise bookings records for as consistently verified by the senior officials' checking and endorsement, which has greatly strengthened the effective and efficient management of our booking system.

    As an industrious staff member with immense potential to manage higher-level of job duties, whenever the seniors like me ask him for the information and advice about management issue of the clubhouse, he is able to immediately provide us with detailed and accurate responses or reports about the cases, whenever seniors like me ask him for information and advice about clubhouse management issues, and he is more than capable of finishing all the assigned tasks, even the extra and urgent ones, timely and satisfactorily. Possessing with With his strong leadership skills and a good wealth of experience in horticultural and arboricultural management, he has actively assisted ing the seniors to manage the horticultural areas at the playground. Courtesy of his sensibly liaison Moreover, by successfully developing a strong working relationship with the horticultural contractor and through his close supervision of their workers, the ir quality of horticultural maintenance services to the playground can be ensured has been assured all along. Likewise, benefited from thanks to Wesley's close scrutiny on of the trees in the backyard of the clubhouse and instant corrective reaction towards the occurrence of trees to deal with any irregularities in the clubhouse, nearly all the trees in the clubhouse have been well maintained and managed, developed, even in the typhoon season, thus ensuring that and the public safety was maintained. can also be greatly upheld in return.

    During the past few months, the clubhouse has experienced a series of notable improvement works like the additional installation of additional lockers, wooden bench and instantaneous water heaters instant-hot-water showers in the changing rooms, the improvement work on to the surface of the cycling area and the work on conversion from converting the fast-food kiosk into a storeroom as well as the renovation work on the tennis courts. Wesley has been actively involved in those improvement works, offering his productive constructive advice during the discussions with several technical units about the work and assisting the seniors to supervise the implementation of the works carried out by them in different stages. Without his wholehearted commitment to those endeavor towards the works, those works they could have never been initiated, facilitated and completed efficiently and effectively.

    Being a helpful and approachable member of staff, Wesley always shows his offers a helping hand [You have made this error before, and I corrected it for you.] to his colleagues and he has always maintained very harmonic harmonious [You were alerted to this mistake twice before!] relationships with everybody working alongside him including the as well as with members of the public. Wesley has also demonstrated his strong mentorhsip ability by spending much time on assisting the seniors to induct and train newly joined nurture the newcomer staff, facilitating the newcomer helping those swiftly integrate into the work ing team. , which considerably benefits the management of the clubhouse to a large extent. Similarly, Wesley is a highly self-motivated person, staff, aiming to develop himself as an all-round managerial talent management professional by proactively enrolling participating in different kind of department run various training courses, with credible result, particularly his and he successfully obtainment of the attained his arborist certificate of arborist in June 2016. Indeed, Wesley's self-strengthening determination not only benefit himself, but also greatly enrichs the efficiency and effectiveness of the working team.
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    teechar, thank you for your valuable advice.

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    Chowbarry, please remember that there is no need to add a new post to a thread to say "Thank you" to anyone. Simply click on the "Thank" button, as you have already done in this case. It saves time for everyone.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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