Are there any errors in my text?

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The human life is under the control of the common laws of nature. The main ones are:

– the struggle for own survival, which includes foraging, the regulation of normal body temperature and water relations,
the construction of the dwelling (shelter), protecting against aggressor (predator);

– the struggle for procreation, which includes the competition for sexual partner;

– the direct procreation, including parental care, protecting his life.

In the absence of extreme social conditions (grim struggle for female, struggle for living space and brood life) which are in nature of wildlife, the significant amount of extra spare adaptational energy which usually splashes out in the form of human offences is accumulated in humans. :?:
 

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Is that by any chance the product of an automatic translator?

In any case, yes, there are a great many errors.
 
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