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    "They might go there and get hurt which is bothering me, but I know it is inevitable"

    "They might go there and get hurt which is bothering me, but I know it is inevitable".

    Please correct the above sentence.

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    Re: "They might go there and get hurt which is bothering me, but I know it is inevita

    Try dividing it into two sentences.
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    Re: "They might go there and get hurt which is bothering me, but I know it is inevita

    Quote Originally Posted by MeyaN View Post
    "They might go there and get hurt which is bothering me, but I know it is inevitable".

    Please correct the above sentence.
    "might" and "inevitable" clash in this sentence. You might change to, "...I fear it is inevitable".

    At first glance, I thought "...which is bothering me..." and "I know/fear it is inevitable" are in agreement, so your conjunction should be "and", not "but". However, after further consideration, I think you have a cause/effect here, or rather, an effect/cause, so your conjunction could be "because". So, a possible rewrite could be:

    "They might go there and get hurt. That is bothering me, because I fear it is inevitable".

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