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    #1

    revisions

    Hi,
    Are the following sentences and phrases correct?

    1. Some revisions to the article:
    2.
    The article was revised in 7039 code. The amend in a file named "Tract 5",were highlighted in yellow color. And the ultimate file was separately sent. All the 11 revisions required from the Associate Editor were made completely. Based on the reviewers' requests, the English version of the questionnaire, the Persian translation of it, the reverse translation and a rated relationship episode as a sample , have been attached and sent.
    A list of the reviewers' revisions listed in below. It was necessary to explain about some issues suggested by the Reviewer 4.
    More than making the required amendments in the text of the article to the possible extent, there are some more explanations in the rest.
    3.
    The required attachments have been sent.
    4.
    It was added to the abstract and highlighted.
    5.
    It has been added to the acknowledgement section.
    6.
    Table number 2 was removed.
    7.
    Based on the Associate Editor's recommendation, it was added to the "Method" section.
    8.
    It was revised to the possible extent.


    Thank you so much.
    Last edited by Narkises; 06-Sep-2016 at 15:01.
    Please correct my mistakes if you encounter any.

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    #2

    Re: revisions

    1. OK

    2. Lot of rewrite. I also don't know what "in 7039 code" means. I edit Chinese to English translations all the time, and this sort of thing is common. I'll leave it as is; you'll need to verify it yourself, I'm afraid. I've made some guesses about your intent in places; you'll need to assess what I've offered to see if it matches your intent.

    The article was revised in 7039 code. The amendments - in a file named "Tract 5" - are highlighted in yellow. The resulting file was sent separately. All 11 revisions required by the Associate Editor are complete. Per the reviewers' requests, I have attached and sent; an English version of the questionnaire; a Persian translation; the reverse translation; and a "rated relationship" episode as a sample.
    A list of the reviewers' revisions are below. It was necessary to explain some issues suggested by Reviewer 4. I have made the required amendments in the text of the article to the greatest extent possible; there are some additional explanations appended separately.

    3. OK

    4. OK

    5. Make "acknowledgments" plural.

    6. OK

    7. Make "recommendations" plural.

    8. It was revised to the greatest extent possible.

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    #3

    Re: revisions

    You said that the number 4 is OK. But on another thread, they suggested this:

    Try,
    "I've made the suggested amendments to the abstract and highlighted them."

    Please review my text. Please improve it to a professional, academic formal text.
    Last edited by Narkises; 06-Sep-2016 at 17:03.
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    #4

    Re: revisions

    Quote Originally Posted by ChinaDan View Post
    Per the reviewers' requests, I have attached and sent; an English version of the questionnaire; a Persian translation; the reverse translation; and a "rated relationship" episode as a sample
    . I have made the required amendments in the text of the article to the greatest extent possible; there are some additional explanations appended...
    I have a problem with this part.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Sep-2016 at 17:50. Reason: Fixed quote box
    Please correct my mistakes if you encounter any.

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