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    #1

    kindly request

    Dears,

    this is my first participation here . i jush have one request. i hope to find the answer and the necessary advise.

    the story is, my boss told me that you have to improve my english language and he will pay the fees for course

    i just i want to send an official mail to my boss telling to him that i have registered for english courses and thanks for offering to me that he will pay the fees .. but i will pay the fees not him


    so i need to write him a nice and professional mail

    kindly advise me

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    Re: kindly request

    Quote Originally Posted by zidane10 View Post
    Dears, Inappropriate. You can start a formal letter with "Dear Sir/Madam/name of recipient" but we don't refer to strangers as "dears".

    This is my first participation post here. I just have one request. I hope to find the answer and the necessary advise advice.

    The story is (no comma here) that my boss told me that you I have to improve my English language and that he will pay the fees for a course.

    i just I want to send an official email to my boss telling to him that I have registered for English courses, and thanks thanking him for offering to me that he will pay the fees, but telling him that I will pay the fees myself. not him


    so I need to write him a nice, and professional email.

    kindly Please advise me.
    Welcome to the forum.

    First, please note my corrections to your post above. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

    If you learn those rules before you start your English course, you will have an advantage.

    Note that "advise" is a verb and "advice" is a noun.

    We don't write letters or emails for people here. Try to write it yourself, post it in the "Editing and Writing Topics" section of the forum and we will be happy to look at it.

    I have an important question. Are you sure that your profile is correct? It says that you are currently an English teacher.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: kindly request

    Thanks a lot for your promote responce.

    Actually am not an english teacher, i will correct this.

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    Re: kindly request

    Quote Originally Posted by zidane10 View Post
    Thanks a lot for your prompt response.

    Actually I am not an English teacher. I will correct this.
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