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    Post Please Help me

    I write transcript of my own ,Please I need Your help to correct/discuss with
    Here I write My dialog
    Me:hey,Where Have to Been Ramesh ?
    neighbor:Hi,Sam I just came from my home town.
    me:oh! so,I heard the news that your are planning to settle in US.
    neighbor:Yes,My Friend,Recently I cracked TOFEL Exam and I get Oppurtinity to go for Further Study in USA.
    me:Oh!,WoW Man,Great,Congrajulation ! For your massive success in your carreer.
    me:So,Ramesh when you are planning to go to USA
    Neighbor:Next Month,23th of date.
    me:Have you completed your documentation work of passport and visa.
    neighbor:Yes,My friend and What about you ?
    me:Oh!don't ask me ,I am still finding job here and we are struggling to get the job.
    neighbor:ok,Why don't you try in Pune ,There you get better Scope and Oppurtinity and Chances to getting job .
    ok bro ,I have to go,I have to complete my Unfinished work.
    me:ok,Bye,Ramesh ,called me when you reach there and Happy journy and best wishes for your future life

    This are my diaglog i write please take out the mistake and help me where i need to work on the most
    thank u

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    Re: Please Help me

    Quote Originally Posted by SBansod23 View Post
    I write wrote the following transcript myself; of my own , please I need Your help me to correct it. /discuss with
    Here I write My dialog
    Hello Sam, and welcome to the forum.
    First, we'd like you to learn some basic spelling, capitalization and punctuation rules:
    1- Always put a single space after a punctuation mark.
    2- Delete any space before a punctuation mark.
    3- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    4- Always capitalize the personal pronoun "I" regardless of its position in the sentence.
    5- Note the correct spelling of "OK"/"okay" and of "you."
    6- Pay attention to the spellchecker warnings.
    Click on the "Edit" button to amend your post. After you do that, we'll be glad to help you with that transcript.

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    A Dialogue

    Me: Hey Ramesh, where have you been?
    Ramesh: I've been to my home town, Ramah.


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