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Hello, I've just received my proposal corrected. I was wondering if you could lend me a hand and point out any more mistakes, I would appreciate it.
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An international organisation is offering travel grants to students to carry out a research project in another country. Applicants should write a proposal in which they describe what type of research project they would like to do abroad. The proposal should also explain how the proposed activity would benefit others as well as the applicant.
The purpose of this proposal is to make
aware peoplepeople aware of any difficulties that students face when studying abroad. At the same time, it would be suggested different projects that could help them in the long run.
It is a well-established fact that studying abroad has become very common among current students, Few people would deny that they know someone who
havehas traveled to a foreingforeign university since it has plenty of advantages. It would not be amiss to mention that such an experience not only expandbroaden their knowledge but also help them to form properlythe building blocks of their future lives properly. However, as it takes places in an unknown country, students face different problems until they get used to it.
Project that will be implemented
The project that I would carry out will consist in passing an exhaustive survey to at least one hundred students that have just started their new year at
ana university abroad. This survey will have two parts:
- Analyse on a day by day basis the different problems that pupils
contendcope with in their classes.
- Calculate the quantity of money spent per month
Recommendations in the long term
Depending on the results of the survey it would be implemented diverse measures. It is of utmost importance to take into account the money that students need to live abroad so as to regulate grants properly.
Benefits of this recommendations
Once that the measures are implemented it may be very helpful for every pupil that want to study abroad. With regard to my benefits, it is not just good for my curriculum, it is also good for myself, helping me to grow as a person.