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    #1

    Kevin arrives to the front door of the theater.

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kevin arrives to the front door of the theater. He sits down on the street and closes his eyes. After a few minutes he stands up. After Kevin opens his eyes he has a vision."

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    #2

    Re: Kevin arrives to the front door of the theater.

    "Kevin arrives at..."

    "After he opens his eyes..." It is not wrong to say "Kevin" again here, but it is unnecessary, as the subject is unambiguous.

    Otherwise, it is OK.
    Last edited by ChinaDan; 14-Sep-2016 at 16:17. Reason: Speeling mistake per Mattew Wai

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    #3

    Re: Kevin arrives to the front door of the theater.

    I think 'OK' should be capitalized.
    I am not a teacher.

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