Student or Learner
I plan to write some pieces (no decision yet; just a plan). I have no intention to include/write about political or religious issues. Those pieces will mainly focus on/cover a list of virtues. And I'd love to know if you can/are ready to help with.
Is it correct to include the parenthetical part at the end of the sentence or at the beginning after the word plan?
Either way works. You can write:
"I plan, (no decision yet; just a plan), to write some pieces".
I've written things like the above, however, when I proofread it later, I'll usually want to rewrite a phrase like that; especially if this is an informative text (rather than narrative).
There is a conflict between "plan" and "no decision". "Plan" suggests intent; "no decision" is contra-indicative. This could be a very useful device in a narrative piece; possibly suggesting the character indeed has this internal conflict.
Assuming, however, your intent is informational, as the tone of the full text suggests, then I would rewrite your sentence:
"I am [seriously] considering writing some pieces". Replace or remove "seriously" with an adverb that invokes your intended level of surety.
Last edited by ChinaDan; 15-Sep-2016 at 03:06. Reason: Spelling correction